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First Draft Complete: The Sacred Mess of Beginnings

Today, I typed the final words of the first draft of The Second Coming of Grace.

It still feels strange to say that. There were days I thought I’d never get here—days when the characters refused to cooperate, when the threads of past and present tangled into knots I didn’t know how to untie, when I wondered whether this story was too strange, too personal, too much.

But I kept showing up. And now, there’s something whole where once there was only hope and scribbled notes.

It’s not perfect. First drafts never are. It’s a living, breathing, messy beginning. But it’s all there: Grace’s ache and awakening, Zofia’s defiant fire, the quiet strength of Rivka, the patient faith of Tobias, the persistent humour of Liam. It’s raw. It’s honest. And it’s mine.

I’ve learned a lot through Grace. About holding pain and joy in the same breath. About transformation that doesn’t look like triumph, but like surviving anyway. About letting go of the masks we wear so something real can emerge.

I’ll spend the next few months shaping this draft into something worthy of the people who’ve walked with me so far—including you. Thank you for reading, for encouraging, for reminding me that stories matter.

Launch day is set for June 9, 2025. Between now and then, I’ll be sharing sneak peeks, reflections, and updates on both the novel and the companion short story collection. There’s so much more to come.

But for now, I’m just breathing in this moment.

Because something beautiful has begun.


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Naomi Vondell

Naomi Vondell is a Canadian writer of literary fiction with spiritual undertones, emotional resonance, and a touch of quiet humour. She lives in Northwestern Ontario, having spent most of her adult life in Toronto and the surrounding area. Her work explores themes of identity, memory, faith, and transformation. A lifelong storyteller, Naomi’s creative path has included acting, songwriting, and screenwriting. She holds a Master’s degree in clinical psychology and worked for years as a psychometrist before turning to fiction full-time. She earned her Creative Writing Certificate from the University of Toronto and studied screenwriting through UCLA Extension, where she trained with industry professionals—including a Star Trek: The Next Generation writer. Naomi is also a caregiver, a lover of Shakespeare and Buster Keaton, a fan of classic sitcoms and naval history, and a survivor of childhood bullying due to her neurodivergence. Her writing is shaped by curiosity, compassion, and a deep reverence for stories that reach across time. She is currently at work on a play (The Shell), two feature films (Going Global and a body-swap political satire), and a companion story collection titled Before the Light.

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  1. Darrow Woods

    Naomi, this is very exciting! It is a happy milestone, to have the whole story “done” in draft form. Will you now take some space and time to breathe, before you dig back into the work?

    1. Naomi Vondell

      Eventually, but right now I’m pumped! I can see where it needs work, and I’m all fired up to do that work. This weekend will likely be full of that. But duty in many forms calls, and sooner or later I’ll have to come back down to the good earth. Hopefully later!

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